Does this sound familiar?
|SOS is right, brother.|
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|The middle shouldn't remind me of this.|
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In Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, Harry's original goal was to survive Hogwarts (especially Potions class with that horrible Professor Snape) and prove he really belonged there. However, once we reach the middle of the book, Harry discovers the school is hiding The Philosopher's Stone and thinks Professor Snape is trying to steal it.
New Event. This should send your protagonist in the opposite direction of his original goal.
When Harry finds the Mirror of Erised, he forgets about Snape and the stone, and becomes consumed by images of his late parents.
Bring the Subplot to the Forefront. Use information from early chapters to throw another complication into the protagonist's way.
Hello, Norbert. Early in the book, Hagrid mentions always wanting a dragon. He tells a shocked Harry that he bought him in a pub from a mysterious stranger. This sets up two events. Firstly, Harry and Hermoine are caught with the dragon after hours and are given detention. Secondly, Hagrid ends up telling them information about a certain three-headed-dog they will need later in the lead up to the climax.
Unexpected Twist. Reveal just enough secrets to change the protagonist's course of action. This also creates more tension.
While Harry is in the forbidden forest as part of his earlier detention, he sees something drinking the dead unicorns blood. He is saved by Firenze who foreshadows Lord Voldemort's return to power. Now Harry believes Snape is planning to steal the stone not for his own immortality, but for The Dark Lord's instead.
This leads into the climax. Knowing none of the other professors will believe him, Harry takes matters into his owns hands when Dumbledore is suddenly summoned away from Hogwarts. With Ron and Hermoine following, he races to the trap door and...well you know the rest.
I hope these exercises will help you get the middle of your novel back in shape!
Do you have any suggestions for a taut, lean middle?